HNIC ima call u out again.Why? Cuz I told God to make it rain.
so u be flooded in the brain
And im not going to be depreived again.
I knuw u just a guy who's just damn plain
And I rhyme like this again.
Im only 19. And I got a lot of green
Im the first person to have gold teeth on a parakeet.
its a damn bird if ya never heard.
Please someone call a medic
Cuz ima bout to wreck this trick
Notice I will still rhyme this sentence with a *****.
it was thankgiving, i ate 10 turkeys.
let me take some ice from my chain
And mix it with yo blood to make you a slurpy
Man, lets play a game of chess. Cuz I be da king boy.
Ur face look similar to a horse boy.
one step near u it will be a acheckmate.
It don't mateer if im whitter than snowflake
2 moves later u be hearing hornes the great ProdigYnious has arrived home//
Where the throne is made out of your bones.
Rate this 1-10. lol
Rate this 1-10?
8.
it was
gud
but
it was kindaaaaa
confuzzling
u know?
like
gold teeth on a parakeet...the eatin 10 turkey?
yeup!
haha
=]
*~*RAWR*~*
Reply:10. =D
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...
what superpower would you choose to have?
Reply:2.0
cheers!
Reply:pretty funny. 7
Reply:10! ♥
Reply:i kinda of liked it but 2 me it was kinda stupid so its about 5
Reply:4. It sounds like rap seeing as how it bounces from topic to topic ,maybe it's something you just need to hear. eh.
Reply:a 5 it's alright.
Reply:it would really help if it wasnt on yahoo answers, so we could actually hear like a rhythym to it or something, but since we cant, i'll ignore that.
it seems to have a good rhyme scheme, and a good flow, im not quite sure where the part about eating 10 turkeys comes in (it actually seems quite random), but overall i will say that it was pretty good, and i give it a 6.
Reply:A pure 10, I mean it is like Gone with the Wind, Shawshank Redemption, and Titanic all mixed into one rap filled masterpiece. Even if 2Pac raised from from his grave he would not be able to pen such a heart touching rap.
This is the rap song that will make Metallica fans buy the CD, Josh Groban fans will buy your concert tickets and Celine Dion will be in the front row of all your shows.
One can only dream of where you have found the gift to write such a wonder full gem.
Not since Grand Master Flash gave us Rapper's Delight have I have been so moved by a rap.
The part about the 10 dollar bird with gold teeth is so real that I forgot that birds do not have teeth!
Be proud you are a true Mozart of the rap kingdom.
You may have a short career though since it will be hard to write another great hit. Like Led Zeppelin they did right by releasing Stairway towards the end cause they could have not top that.
I hope you copyrighted this Mona Lisa of rap so no one steals it and records it. I mean if DMX or Snoop Dogg see this they will be releasing in time for the Christmas sales.
Kid Rock said he was going Platinum, you are going gold covered 200 karet diamond!!!
Reply:yo some guys ridin on your balls hard. or maybe you logged in on a diff name and gave urself props? celine dion and josh groban what????
yo i answered your open invitation to battle. get @ me dogg
Reply:lol it was ok ................... i give it a 5
Reply:get off my d*ck..............u dont need to keep mentioning my name for attention...jesus christ
Reply:3
Reply:1, but thats only cuz 0s not a option
Reply:2
Reply:chaa...hahah ill give you a 2.
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